Posting new song for feedback
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Laurie Stevens
Hey Wayman,just wanted to let you know that we're bringing in our first pro songwriter to offer some feedback on your songs. We haven't forgotten you. We also have a couple new members joining who are looking for feedback and they will likely be commenting too. Also, we will be announcing a pro critique, soon, where you can get written feedback on your stuff. Oh, and you're the first to know but the Independent Music Awards deadline has been extended to August 29th. So you can still get the buy one entry and get another free offer through the SGA.
8 years ago
James Porterfield
... I like the stories and the lyrical content. Reminds me a little bit of early Ice T meets Fetty Wap.
My only negative would be that it feels like your flow is a little forced at times. Since I don't rap myself I can't say whether its the rhythm of your flow or the phrasing/lyric. But I do listen to a lot of rap and it seems like you could edit some of the lyric to fit the backing beat better at times.
I liked the break down between verses too! Might be even better if you there was even more change in the backing track.
The second verse was funny as hell! And it definitely flowed better. And I liked the ending.
Post a lyric next time if you can! Always better to read along. 8 years ago
My only negative would be that it feels like your flow is a little forced at times. Since I don't rap myself I can't say whether its the rhythm of your flow or the phrasing/lyric. But I do listen to a lot of rap and it seems like you could edit some of the lyric to fit the backing beat better at times.
I liked the break down between verses too! Might be even better if you there was even more change in the backing track.
The second verse was funny as hell! And it definitely flowed better. And I liked the ending.
Post a lyric next time if you can! Always better to read along. 8 years ago